critiques 5/2:
Faith Canales — faithcanlas.com
I love how clean and elegant the way your website is set up and I think it’s very easy to navigate. I enjoyed looking through all of your work and I think they look very professional, so I would definitely love to see more works added to your portfolio in the future. Also, I liked how you're able to click on the images to be able to view them up close.
I think my only suggestions would be for your homepage and the descriptions of your work. I think for your home page maybe you could add some of your strongest works to immediately capture the viewer’s attention. I think your descriptions for your work are great, so I would be curious to see more of your thought process and the reasons behind some of your design choices. Overall I think your portfolio is very compelling and I can’t wait to see what you create in the future!
Asher Perez — asherperez.studio
First, I think all of your works are incredible and I think the descriptions are very insightful. I also liked how you added details like the medium and size of your works. I love the layout of your website, it’s very clear and easy to use. I especially like the black background and I think that was a great choice as it makes all of the colors stand out more.
I think the only suggestion I have would be about the homepage. I think it’s a great idea to show the different categories and the pictures of your art. As soon as you land on the homepage though it's hard to see all three images at the same time, so I think it would be cool to find a way to show that. Overall I think your portfolio looks great and I can’t wait to see more of your work!
Yusun Lee — lys991214.wixsite.com/yoursun1214
I think your site was easy to use and the idea of the Apple icons like the folders was a cool idea. I enjoyed looking through your case studies and I think your work is really strong. I think the layout is unique and the way you organized your works was very smooth and coherent.
I think my only suggestion would be about the landing page of each of your sections. Viewing on my laptop, I think to me the headings could be a bit smaller as well as the folder icons so they’re visible without having to scroll. Overall I think your work is very strong and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
Jennix Bien — jennix-archives.myportfolio.com
I think the layout of your website is very easy to navigate and it makes it easy to view all of your works. I really liked looking through all of the work you’ve created and I think the descriptions gave a lot of great insight. I also loved your pictures under your “about” page, I think they’re really fun and unique.
I think the only small suggestion I have would be to make the headings of each of your categories stand out more. I might make “graphic design,” “studio art,” and “press + awards” slightly bigger than each of its subcategories. Overall, I think your work is super strong, I loved looking at all of your designs and I look forward to seeing more of your work!